Revising and Revising

Article Series - Four Shards of Heaven

  1. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Preliminaries
  2. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Prologue
  3. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 1
  4. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 2
  5. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 3
  6. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 4
  7. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 5
  8. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 6
  9. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 7
  10. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 8
  11. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 9
  12. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 10
  13. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 11
  14. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 12
  15. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 13
  16. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 14
  17. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 15
  18. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 16
  19. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 17
  20. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 18
  21. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 19
  22. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 20
  23. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 21
  24. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 22
  25. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 23
  26. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 24
  27. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 25
  28. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 26
  29. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 27
  30. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 28
  31. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 29
  32. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Chapter 30
  33. Protected: Four Shards of Heaven: Epilogue
  34. Revising and Revising
  35. 512 Pages
  36. Four Shards of Heaven: Synopsis

I took a few days off from actually writing anything related to Four Shards after I finished it up last week. Things were percolating in my mind, though, and today I set about doing some revisions to the first few chapters. Though revisions are tremendously tough to do for me, the day went well. One particularly troubling chapter is much improved. Alas, the changes have mostly added rather than taken away. (I have never, personally, been able to do that “cut 10%” ideal folks talk about.) So the book is now closer to 109,000 words long. I’m through over a sixth of the book, though, and I imagine things will get more smooth as I get further along.

On the very positive side of things, this has been my first chance to actually read through things, and you know what? It doesn’t suck.




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